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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-2/#comment-19027</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Mar 2011 01:14:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s kind of complicated to separate them out, Barbara. If you can do it as sub-recipes, then fine, but I really don&#039;t like the word &quot;divided.&quot; If it says in the method: &quot;Add 2 eggs,&quot; even if it says &quot;4 large eggs&quot; in the ingredients list, I think that&#039;s pretty clear. But yes, I have done the same thing from time to time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s kind of complicated to separate them out, Barbara. If you can do it as sub-recipes, then fine, but I really don&#8217;t like the word &#8220;divided.&#8221; If it says in the method: &#8220;Add 2 eggs,&#8221; even if it says &#8220;4 large eggs&#8221; in the ingredients list, I think that&#8217;s pretty clear. But yes, I have done the same thing from time to time.</p>
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		<title>By: Barbara &#124; VinoLuciStyle</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-2/#comment-19022</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara &#124; VinoLuciStyle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Mar 2011 23:12:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The one thing you hit on that I hate in a recipe is not separating out ingredients if they are for totally separate components. I acknowledge I&#039;ve made the mistake of adding all of something at one time and I blame that on so many years of experience which often lends itself to expecting a certain rhythm to a recipe. If I have four eggs ready and read it&#039;s time to add eggs; I&#039;ve dumped in all four in before realizing I was only supposed to use two and save two for the next component.
So...if I make something that I plan to add to my blog, I rewrite the ingredient list; I prefer seeing those components separated and have always assumed others would too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The one thing you hit on that I hate in a recipe is not separating out ingredients if they are for totally separate components. I acknowledge I&#8217;ve made the mistake of adding all of something at one time and I blame that on so many years of experience which often lends itself to expecting a certain rhythm to a recipe. If I have four eggs ready and read it&#8217;s time to add eggs; I&#8217;ve dumped in all four in before realizing I was only supposed to use two and save two for the next component.<br />
So&#8230;if I make something that I plan to add to my blog, I rewrite the ingredient list; I prefer seeing those components separated and have always assumed others would too.</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-2/#comment-16251</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Jan 2011 16:59:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Love that last tip, Rick, and the earlier one about cutting and pasting as well. 

 I&#039;m in the &quot;what else are you going to do with it camp&quot; as far as &quot;set aside&quot; goes. As for serial commas, I never used them when I was a magazine and newspaper editor, because we wanted people to read quickly. Funny how camps are set up.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love that last tip, Rick, and the earlier one about cutting and pasting as well. </p>
<p> I&#8217;m in the &#8220;what else are you going to do with it camp&#8221; as far as &#8220;set aside&#8221; goes. As for serial commas, I never used them when I was a magazine and newspaper editor, because we wanted people to read quickly. Funny how camps are set up.</p>
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		<title>By: Rick Rodgers</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-2/#comment-16244</link>
		<dc:creator>Rick Rodgers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Jan 2011 13:53:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When I have an ingredient that is prepped early in the recipe and then set aside (such as melting chocolate, toasting nuts, or sauteing the meat for a stew), if is very easy to forget to put it into the dish later.  I now highlight, copy, cut, and paste the step to the end of the recipe as a reminder.  I haven&#039;t forgotten to add the chocolate to brownies since.

The above paragraph has two issues that could start a &quot;discussion&quot; with my editor for the recipe.  First is the use of &quot;set aside.&quot;  Some editors (and recipe writers) hate that phrase, arguing &quot;Well, what are you supposed to do with it?&quot;  I use it because I do think it helps the cook keep track, especially in recipes with many components.  The second is whether or not to use a serial comma.  Most of my publishers use it, so I do, too. 

When you have a blog, you can do whatever you want.  When you are working for a publisher, they often have an established recipe style sheet that has to be followed, so all talk about whether or not water is included in the ingredient list is moot.  I recently had a publisher who insisted on using two numerals in sequence in the ingredients list (&quot;1 3 1/2-pound chicken, cut up&quot;), something is anathema in every recipe writing guide. 

One other trick:  When you have a long ingredient list (for example a curry with a long list of spices and vegetables in the same step), copy, cut, and paste the entire list into your recipe directions.  Then, just cut the details you don&#039;t need (&quot;2 large onions, chopped&quot; becomes &quot;onions&quot; in the directions.)  This way you won&#039;t accidentally drop an important ingredient from the lineup.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When I have an ingredient that is prepped early in the recipe and then set aside (such as melting chocolate, toasting nuts, or sauteing the meat for a stew), if is very easy to forget to put it into the dish later.  I now highlight, copy, cut, and paste the step to the end of the recipe as a reminder.  I haven&#8217;t forgotten to add the chocolate to brownies since.</p>
<p>The above paragraph has two issues that could start a &#8220;discussion&#8221; with my editor for the recipe.  First is the use of &#8220;set aside.&#8221;  Some editors (and recipe writers) hate that phrase, arguing &#8220;Well, what are you supposed to do with it?&#8221;  I use it because I do think it helps the cook keep track, especially in recipes with many components.  The second is whether or not to use a serial comma.  Most of my publishers use it, so I do, too. </p>
<p>When you have a blog, you can do whatever you want.  When you are working for a publisher, they often have an established recipe style sheet that has to be followed, so all talk about whether or not water is included in the ingredient list is moot.  I recently had a publisher who insisted on using two numerals in sequence in the ingredients list (&#8220;1 3 1/2-pound chicken, cut up&#8221;), something is anathema in every recipe writing guide. </p>
<p>One other trick:  When you have a long ingredient list (for example a curry with a long list of spices and vegetables in the same step), copy, cut, and paste the entire list into your recipe directions.  Then, just cut the details you don&#8217;t need (&#8220;2 large onions, chopped&#8221; becomes &#8220;onions&#8221; in the directions.)  This way you won&#8217;t accidentally drop an important ingredient from the lineup.</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-1/#comment-14789</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Dec 2010 23:13:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That bothers me too. I think it is a convention to put it at the top. Most of the time I ignore it because my oven only takes a few minutes to heat up.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That bothers me too. I think it is a convention to put it at the top. Most of the time I ignore it because my oven only takes a few minutes to heat up.</p>
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		<title>By: sara</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-1/#comment-14746</link>
		<dc:creator>sara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Dec 2010 05:18:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It bothers me even more when they do write preheat the oven indiscriminately at the beginning of the method. If I&#039;m making bread or pizza I don&#039;t preheat the oven before starting to make the dough or the oven will be preheating for hours!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It bothers me even more when they do write preheat the oven indiscriminately at the beginning of the method. If I&#8217;m making bread or pizza I don&#8217;t preheat the oven before starting to make the dough or the oven will be preheating for hours!</p>
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		<title>By: Peter B Wolf, CEC</title>
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		<dc:creator>Peter B Wolf, CEC</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Dec 2010 16:43:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Biggest of all, in my opinion, &quot;ingredient amounts&quot; in more than one format in same recipe (and worse, if in same book) ie. &#039;Grams&#039; &amp; &#039;Ounces&#039; &amp; &#039;Spoonfuls&#039; &amp; &#039;Cups&#039; &amp; &#039;Liters&#039;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Biggest of all, in my opinion, &#8220;ingredient amounts&#8221; in more than one format in same recipe (and worse, if in same book) ie. &#8216;Grams&#8217; &amp; &#8216;Ounces&#8217; &amp; &#8216;Spoonfuls&#8217; &amp; &#8216;Cups&#8217; &amp; &#8216;Liters&#8217;</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
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		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 06 Nov 2010 17:33:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m going with your boss here, Samantha. Typically the prep is listed after the ingredient, ex. 1 onion, diced. And of course, 1 cup cream and 1 cup whipped cream are two different amounts.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m going with your boss here, Samantha. Typically the prep is listed after the ingredient, ex. 1 onion, diced. And of course, 1 cup cream and 1 cup whipped cream are two different amounts.</p>
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		<title>By: Samantha</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-1/#comment-11800</link>
		<dc:creator>Samantha</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 06 Nov 2010 06:55:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks so much for the tips! I was recently hired to be a recipe writer for a food company. I took up a seminar on recipe writing a few years back but I wrote down a note I couldn&#039;t understand (thanks to my pristine hand writing!). Anyway, I wanted to ask if, when writing the ingredients, it is acceptable to write the preparation first before the ingredient if my intention is to measure the prepped ingredient? (ex. 1 cup whipped cream vs. 1 cup cream, whipped). My boss keeps on changing the order when I have explained to her that the cream should be whipped first before placed in a cup. She said the standard should be preparation AFTER ingredient. What&#039;s the correct way? thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks so much for the tips! I was recently hired to be a recipe writer for a food company. I took up a seminar on recipe writing a few years back but I wrote down a note I couldn&#8217;t understand (thanks to my pristine hand writing!). Anyway, I wanted to ask if, when writing the ingredients, it is acceptable to write the preparation first before the ingredient if my intention is to measure the prepped ingredient? (ex. 1 cup whipped cream vs. 1 cup cream, whipped). My boss keeps on changing the order when I have explained to her that the cream should be whipped first before placed in a cup. She said the standard should be preparation AFTER ingredient. What&#8217;s the correct way? thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/05/7-most-common-recipe-writing-errors/comment-page-1/#comment-10672</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 03 Oct 2010 15:42:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Agreed that saying &quot;Add&quot; every time is boring. You are working on other terms. Stick with it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Agreed that saying &#8220;Add&#8221; every time is boring. You are working on other terms. Stick with it!</p>
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