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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/02/now-thats-how-to-write-a-review/comment-page-1/#comment-3952</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Feb 2010 04:17:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kinda reads in a stream-of-consciousness way. Yes, it&#039;s a nice change. Thanks for sharing it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kinda reads in a stream-of-consciousness way. Yes, it&#8217;s a nice change. Thanks for sharing it.</p>
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		<title>By: Nate @ House of Annie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nate @ House of Annie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Feb 2010 04:01:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My friend Mike just posted a review of a hawker stall that I think strikes a good balance between negative and not too serious.

http://kongkay1.blogspot.com/2010/02/somewhere-in-ss15-subang-jaya.html

Perhaps it takes someone with a developed sense of humor to have the ability to do this.  It&#039;s easy to write something positive and glowing.  We see too much of it in advertising. Trying to talk down about something without being overly snarky is harder, because we have less good examples of it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My friend Mike just posted a review of a hawker stall that I think strikes a good balance between negative and not too serious.</p>
<p><a href="http://kongkay1.blogspot.com/2010/02/somewhere-in-ss15-subang-jaya.html" rel="nofollow">http://kongkay1.blogspot.com/2010/02/somewhere-in-ss15-subang-jaya.html</a></p>
<p>Perhaps it takes someone with a developed sense of humor to have the ability to do this.  It&#8217;s easy to write something positive and glowing.  We see too much of it in advertising. Trying to talk down about something without being overly snarky is harder, because we have less good examples of it.</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/02/now-thats-how-to-write-a-review/comment-page-1/#comment-3940</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Feb 2010 00:54:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey, thanks for participating, Owen. It&#039;s good to read the perspective of a working reviewer.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, thanks for participating, Owen. It&#8217;s good to read the perspective of a working reviewer.</p>
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		<title>By: Owen Rubin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Owen Rubin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Feb 2010 20:15:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I write technology product reviews, and I disagree. People want information...  

First: Your opinion IS based on your personal feelings, and that is a big part of a review. Just don&#039;t make stuff up, or attack the company, and you will not be sued. You can say, &quot;... and I think you can find a better product than this one...&quot; and that is OK, it is your opinion. You cannot say &quot;... and company XYZ was just stupid to even make something like this ...&quot; because now you are attacking the company. Opinion based on experience with the product is just fine.

BUT, you should state negative facts. No product is 100% perfect. It is your responsibility to tell your reader all they need to know to make an informed decision, good and bad. You will not get sued for that ( and truth is always a defense anyway.) 

If the reader is unsure, after reading your review, thenyou did the job. Let THEM decide if the product, service, or restaurant is right for them, and you do that by informing them as completely as possible. 

Think of the flip side: Let&#039;s say you wrote an endorsement of a product. How would you feel about a reader blasting you for writing only the good? They buy the product, only to discover that it had problems you did not mention. They were not helped, and they may not trust you again. You job is to review and be critical, not to be the PR arm for the product or company and ignore the bad.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I write technology product reviews, and I disagree. People want information&#8230;  </p>
<p>First: Your opinion IS based on your personal feelings, and that is a big part of a review. Just don&#8217;t make stuff up, or attack the company, and you will not be sued. You can say, &#8220;&#8230; and I think you can find a better product than this one&#8230;&#8221; and that is OK, it is your opinion. You cannot say &#8220;&#8230; and company XYZ was just stupid to even make something like this &#8230;&#8221; because now you are attacking the company. Opinion based on experience with the product is just fine.</p>
<p>BUT, you should state negative facts. No product is 100% perfect. It is your responsibility to tell your reader all they need to know to make an informed decision, good and bad. You will not get sued for that ( and truth is always a defense anyway.) </p>
<p>If the reader is unsure, after reading your review, thenyou did the job. Let THEM decide if the product, service, or restaurant is right for them, and you do that by informing them as completely as possible. </p>
<p>Think of the flip side: Let&#8217;s say you wrote an endorsement of a product. How would you feel about a reader blasting you for writing only the good? They buy the product, only to discover that it had problems you did not mention. They were not helped, and they may not trust you again. You job is to review and be critical, not to be the PR arm for the product or company and ignore the bad.</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/02/now-thats-how-to-write-a-review/comment-page-1/#comment-3929</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Feb 2010 20:03:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Criticism is opinion based on your observations of using a product. Sometimes facts are not relevant. For example, my Kitchen Aid has trouble mixing the ingredients at the bottom of the bowl, and I sometimes have to stop it and mix the bottom ingredients myself. That is a fact. That is the downside I experience when using the product.  Stating that it&#039;s annoying but I can work around it is an opinion

There is nothing slanderous about either statement. You are the second person to refer to slander in the comments, so I would like to address it. Typically slander refers to damaging a person&#039;s reputation. It is rarely used for a product. Suing someone for slander is the most extreme possible response to a review, and it rarely happens.  Typically if there is an error in a review, a publication corrects it. There is no lawsuit. 

Where writers get into trouble is when they that state that the product doesn&#039;t do something it claims to do -- and they&#039;re wrong -- or when they make stuff up or attack a company. I would define &quot;getting into trouble&quot; as being contacted by the company in a complaint. That&#039;s it. In extreme cases, there are &quot;malicious falsehoods&quot; leading to a defamation of a product, and that&#039;s when lawsuits result. 

The best reviews are positive with a little bit of downside -- like life, generally good but a little bit complicated. 

 
Maybe people are more nervous about an end to all the freebies, and that&#039;s what it&#039;s really about.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Criticism is opinion based on your observations of using a product. Sometimes facts are not relevant. For example, my Kitchen Aid has trouble mixing the ingredients at the bottom of the bowl, and I sometimes have to stop it and mix the bottom ingredients myself. That is a fact. That is the downside I experience when using the product.  Stating that it&#8217;s annoying but I can work around it is an opinion</p>
<p>There is nothing slanderous about either statement. You are the second person to refer to slander in the comments, so I would like to address it. Typically slander refers to damaging a person&#8217;s reputation. It is rarely used for a product. Suing someone for slander is the most extreme possible response to a review, and it rarely happens.  Typically if there is an error in a review, a publication corrects it. There is no lawsuit. </p>
<p>Where writers get into trouble is when they that state that the product doesn&#8217;t do something it claims to do &#8212; and they&#8217;re wrong &#8212; or when they make stuff up or attack a company. I would define &#8220;getting into trouble&#8221; as being contacted by the company in a complaint. That&#8217;s it. In extreme cases, there are &#8220;malicious falsehoods&#8221; leading to a defamation of a product, and that&#8217;s when lawsuits result. </p>
<p>The best reviews are positive with a little bit of downside &#8212; like life, generally good but a little bit complicated. </p>
<p>Maybe people are more nervous about an end to all the freebies, and that&#8217;s what it&#8217;s really about.</p>
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		<title>By: Erika from The Pastry Chef At Home</title>
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		<dc:creator>Erika from The Pastry Chef At Home</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Feb 2010 21:35:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Middle ground reviews (positive + cons) are indeed hard to do. It&#039;s hard to find the right balance. Criticism is hard because you have to be careful to base it strictly on facts rather than your personal preferences.  Also, it is terrifying to think you might get a letter from someone&#039;s lawyer threatening you for slander. 

I think in the end, people want to know whether a product (or restaurant) is going to be a waste of their money or not, and they want the reviewer to have a clear opinion.  

Acknowledging the fact that a product can be both good and bad simultaneously, leaves the reader feeling a bit unsure. I&#039;m not saying this is a bad thing, but I think people prefer strong opinions (black and white) when it comes to reviews.  It makes it easier to make a choice about that product in the future.  

Personally, I prefer reviews that list the pros and cons.  I like making decisions based on both.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Middle ground reviews (positive + cons) are indeed hard to do. It&#8217;s hard to find the right balance. Criticism is hard because you have to be careful to base it strictly on facts rather than your personal preferences.  Also, it is terrifying to think you might get a letter from someone&#8217;s lawyer threatening you for slander. </p>
<p>I think in the end, people want to know whether a product (or restaurant) is going to be a waste of their money or not, and they want the reviewer to have a clear opinion.  </p>
<p>Acknowledging the fact that a product can be both good and bad simultaneously, leaves the reader feeling a bit unsure. I&#8217;m not saying this is a bad thing, but I think people prefer strong opinions (black and white) when it comes to reviews.  It makes it easier to make a choice about that product in the future.  </p>
<p>Personally, I prefer reviews that list the pros and cons.  I like making decisions based on both.</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
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		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Feb 2010 19:40:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Casey, I don&#039;t know if I agree with her. There are lots of kinds of food writing, and happy eating is just one kind. There&#039;s political writing and food history, for example, which are not about happy eating. Maybe the key word is passion, not happiness.

Well, I don&#039;t see the point of not noting the positive aspects either, and I&#039;m not suggesting that. 

My, I&#039;m feeling disagreeable. I think my cranky pants are on today!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Casey, I don&#8217;t know if I agree with her. There are lots of kinds of food writing, and happy eating is just one kind. There&#8217;s political writing and food history, for example, which are not about happy eating. Maybe the key word is passion, not happiness.</p>
<p>Well, I don&#8217;t see the point of not noting the positive aspects either, and I&#8217;m not suggesting that. </p>
<p>My, I&#8217;m feeling disagreeable. I think my cranky pants are on today!</p>
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		<title>By: Casey@Good. Food. Stories.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Casey@Good. Food. Stories.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Feb 2010 02:50:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My new favorite quote comes from food journalist/cookbook author, who said at a talk this week that &quot;the voice of eating should be a happy one.&quot; Yes, we can and should be unbiased in our reviews, but I don&#039;t see the point in writing about something on our site if we&#039;re not going to note the positive aspects of the subject - whether it be a restaurant, book, movie, piece of kitchen equipment, or ingredient. 

As you well know, we can bring the snark, and we&#039;ll certainly point out flaws in the system (see Danielle&#039;s review of the Jean-Georges prix fixe lunch), but you&#039;re exactly right - balance is key.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My new favorite quote comes from food journalist/cookbook author, who said at a talk this week that &#8220;the voice of eating should be a happy one.&#8221; Yes, we can and should be unbiased in our reviews, but I don&#8217;t see the point in writing about something on our site if we&#8217;re not going to note the positive aspects of the subject &#8211; whether it be a restaurant, book, movie, piece of kitchen equipment, or ingredient. </p>
<p>As you well know, we can bring the snark, and we&#8217;ll certainly point out flaws in the system (see Danielle&#8217;s review of the Jean-Georges prix fixe lunch), but you&#8217;re exactly right &#8211; balance is key.</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
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		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Feb 2010 23:41:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah, I thought so. Heh, as you would say.

Did you read the samples in the links? They are written by people more skilled than I.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, I thought so. Heh, as you would say.</p>
<p>Did you read the samples in the links? They are written by people more skilled than I.</p>
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		<title>By: diannejacob</title>
		<link>http://diannej.com/blog/2010/02/now-thats-how-to-write-a-review/comment-page-1/#comment-3875</link>
		<dc:creator>diannejacob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Feb 2010 23:40:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, certainly just writing about a product is not a review, as Cheryl mentioned. 

Would love to know from people who only write endorsements whether they are afraid that something bad will happen if they write a review that contains pros and cons. Good question, Jenn.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, certainly just writing about a product is not a review, as Cheryl mentioned. </p>
<p>Would love to know from people who only write endorsements whether they are afraid that something bad will happen if they write a review that contains pros and cons. Good question, Jenn.</p>
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